3344 M&W Narrative

This is a preview of my narrative I have not finnished it and I need to fix some mistakes, but I will continue to improve let me know what you guys think


Dear Diary,

The year is 2015 It’s the middle of the night in July, what in the past many would look forward to as summer, especially here in Texas. Now; however, is considered winter, not just what many people consider Texas winter, where the temperature drops to maybe 30 degree’s, but a freezing life taking winter, that which many would consider an ice age. It’s funny everyone talked about it and pretended they cared, but nothing really changed, now worldwide Billions of lives have been lost, the weather changes rapidly from extreme heat to extreme freezing, which I recall is how the Moon’s temperature changed during day and night, now it changes here in the same manner, as if nothing is left to protect us. Global Warming is the cataclysm that has enslaved us to being more aware of the exact time of day, and scurrying around finding shelter. We are no longer free, as we once assumed we had the right to be, we are now servants to the weather, and I am among one of the survivors. My name is Jennifer and here is my story.